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"Carbon Monoxide," L/Light (NC-17) 
18th-Aug-2006 03:03 pm
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This was going to be for the dn_yaoi fanfiction contest, but then I realized that the minumum word count for that was 500, and this is only 430. ^^; So now it's just a ficlet.

...I changed the fic around some and now the title doesn't work at all as well as I would've liked, but eh.

Title: Carbon Monoxide
Fandom: Death Note
Pairing: L/Light
Rating: NC-17
Notes: PWP. No spoilers. Set during moderately early chapters... no handcuffs, I mean.
Word count: 430



“I am Kira,” L says, smoothly and evenly (in almost the same tone of voice with which he confessed to being L), looking over his shoulder at Light with wide, filmy eyes. Light has thrust his cock deeper inside of L before the full weight of the words sink in, and when they do he digs his nails hard into L’s shoulder.

What?” Light spits, trying to pull out; L pushes back on his cock and makes Light shudder and loosen his grip on L’s shoulders. “You – this whole time –”

L smiles gently, languidly dipping his tongue out onto his lips. “That’s right, Yagami-kun. I befriended you since I knew you would be skilled at assisting the investigation, and now that you’re so close to catching me, I will kill you.” His voice is even, his eyes as innocent as ever.

“You’re lying,” Light retorts through his teeth, slamming into L roughly, “stop messing with me, Ryuzaki!”

The long, spindly fingers that L has wrapped around his own hard cock stop moving for a fraction of a second, and he bites down on his lower lip and then releases his breath.

“If you were Kira,” he says softly, starting to pump himself again, “you would automatically assume that I was lying. More than assume – you would know. Isn’t that right, Yagami-kun?”

“Stop twisting my words,” Light grits out in response, between quiet pants, feeling L’s muscles start to clench around him. He keeps moving – he couldn’t stop now, even if he had a knife to his throat – and as soon as he comes he pulls himself out quickly. L doesn’t wince, even as he touches a finger to his entrance and feels blood; he is still studying Light intently, this time bringing his thumb to his mouth, absentmindedly licking a bit of his own semen off the tip.

“You weren’t afraid,” L contemplates, watching with a strange fervor as Light zips up his pants.

Light glances at him, feeling a pressing tension build up between his eyes. He should feel relaxed, but instead is only rather annoyed.

“I’m not afraid to die,” Light says in response, meeting L’s eyes. “If you really are Kira, and you kill me now, the Task Force will have countless pieces of evidence to use against you. I’d be dying for a cause, Ryuzaki.”

He finishes buttoning up his shirt, and, casting one last tense glance at L, heads for the door, reaching for the cell phone in his pocket.

“Twenty-four percent,” L muses from the floor, dark eyes meeting Light’s in a cold, inevitable challenge.

He smiles.
Comments 
18th-Aug-2006 11:21 pm (UTC)
Ooooo. That was one tactic L hadn't used! But that was awesome; very in-character, both of them, and I like your style! Love!
21st-Aug-2006 09:39 pm (UTC)
Probably because if he'd used it in any other situation, everyone would've taken him for insane. :D Not that they probably don't do that enough already.

And thank you so much! ♥ Comments make me happy.
21st-Aug-2006 12:22 pm (UTC)
*purr* That was really very awesome- catty and clever and perfectly in character, a great idea for a way to catch Light-as-Kira.

...and you got me to read smut at an internet cafe. Curse you! ^^
21st-Aug-2006 09:53 pm (UTC)
Thanks! ♥ Although catching Light like that would never work in a professional situation. XD; But L's the kind of person who might try it anyway...

I'm glad you like it, though... Light smut is weird, because it seems like coming isn't really anything to him (and sex is just pretty much a tool – he doesn't necessarily enjoy it... *kills mental images of whore!Light, augh) and so I didn't emphasize the coming part, but then it just seemed kind of boring. So I'm glad it wasn't actually boring or anything.
26th-Aug-2006 02:21 pm (UTC)
Wow. I think L probably would do that just because of random physical attraction, but I wonder if L would identify physical attraction for what it is . . . I think the closest he ever came to looking at porno was seeing Light's girly magazines through the hidden cameras. XD
26th-Aug-2006 03:15 pm (UTC)
Yeah, L's weird like that. XD He'd probably convince himself that he'd done it to further the investigation, or something crazy like that. (And I know that canonically, L probably isn't interested in sex, at all, but I like to pretend that that comment he made about it being normal to look at porn when you're 17, meant that he did too. XD; But, y'know, probably not.)
5th-Nov-2006 03:21 am (UTC)
that is SWEET. MUCH love.
5th-Nov-2006 04:47 pm (UTC)
Thank you! ♥

I was worried about this since everyone says not to start out a fic with porn, so I'm glad you liked it. ^^
19th-Feb-2007 04:18 pm (UTC)
GOD YES. <3
19th-Feb-2007 04:44 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it! ^^ Thanks for commenting.
7th-May-2008 11:02 pm (UTC) - ^_^
That was soooooo cool. L is awesome.
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